posted by Emmanuel at 6/25/2007 09:19:00 AM
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Monday, June 25, 2007
Tuesday, June 19, 2007
Question about Collaborative Project
When we turn in our documents tomorrow, do you want the proposal? And also, is the proposal included when we turn in the final draft of everything?
posted by Lindsay Merrill at 6/19/2007 10:51:00 AM
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Monday, June 18, 2007
End-of-semester Deadlines
OK, as promised, here are the deadlines for the rest of the semester:
I hope this helps. Remember, if you have questions, post them here. I'll try to respond more quickly as it is the end of the semester.
T. F.
- Today (6/17) Job Search Documents including two versions of your resume, one letter asking for an advice and information interview, and one thank you note. (You can type it as a word document so you can attach it, but when you do it "for real" you should hand write it.)
- Tomorrow (6/18) Final draft of Project 1 (Technical Writing in your field)
- Wednesday (6/19) Draft of all Project #3 (Collaborative Project) Documents (not the cover memo, unless you want comments on it as well.)
- Next Tuesday (6/26) Final Draft of Project #3 (Collaborative Project) including the documents you proposed, plus a cover memo as discussed in class. NOTE: even though your project and your partner's project will be the same, each person should submit his/her own. That way if someone can't get theirs in, you are covered. Also, your cover memos can be done collaboratively or individually--your choice.
- Next Tuesday (6/26) Final draft of Job Search documents
I hope this helps. Remember, if you have questions, post them here. I'll try to respond more quickly as it is the end of the semester.
T. F.
posted by T. F. at 6/18/2007 12:38:00 PM
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Saturday, June 16, 2007
RESPONSE TO KIM'S RESUMES AND LETTERS
I think that you did a very good job with your request and thank you letters. It was good that you specified that you were not trying to get a job but that you just wanted information on a job in the field. I think that your resumes were good too but you might want to put the headings of the categories in bold or capital letters to make them stand out more. Also I was a little confused on the two different addresses on the different resumes. The home one was put on one and it said school in parenthesis but, there was no school address listed. I especially liked how you kept the resumes short and to the point and did not put a lot of “fluff” in them.
posted by KRISTINSUTTER at 6/16/2007 08:55:00 PM
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Friday, June 15, 2007
2 RESUMES AND LETTERS
Kristin A. Sutter
ksutter@clemson.edu
104 Sumter Court Apt-I 9420 Bridle Spur
Central, SC 29630 Chapel Hill, NC 27516
(919) 302-1974 (919) 933-7239
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a job in the field of real estate utilizing my skills in customer relations, marketing, and communication.
EDUCATION
Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, minor in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, South Carolina
May 2008 GPA: 3.0
REAL ESTATE SKILLS
Customer Relations
~Worked in customer service at The Gap for three months
~Helped customers to find what they were looking for
~Helped unsatisfied customers to become satisfied
~Went out of my way to locate items for customers
~Worked to provide a customer friendly atmosphere
Marketing
~Worked at Ruby Tuesday for 14 months
~Help to sale new menu items to the ideal target markets
~Portray myself in the friendliest way possible
~Create an atmosphere that makes people want to return
Communication
~Work at Tiger paw productions street team at Littlejohn
~Talk to managers of restaurants, gas stations, small stores to make relations
~Explain to the community what concerts are going to take place
EMPLOYNMENT HISTORY
Clemson University Tiger paw productions, Clemson, South Carolina
Street Team member February 2007-Present
Ruby Tuesday, Clemson, South Carolina
Waitress May 2006-Present
Meredith College phoneathon, Raleigh, North Carolina
Alumni Relations Caller June 2005-August 2005
The Gap, Durham, North Carolina
Sales Representative October 2004-January 2005
Seven Oaks Athletic Club May 2000-August 2000
Lifeguard May 2001-August 2001
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kristin A. Sutter
ksutter@clemson.edu
104 Sumter Court Apt-I 9420 Bridle Spur
Central, SC 29630 Chapel Hill, NC 27516
(919) 302-1974 (919) 933-7239
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a job in the field of marketing utilizing my education from Clemson University and my skills in customer relations, marketing, and communication.
EDUCATION
Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, minor in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, South Carolina
May 2008 GPA: 3.0
REAL ESTATE SKILLS
Customer Relations
~Worked in customer service at The Gap for three months
~Helped customers to find what they were looking for
~Helped unsatisfied customers to become satisfied
~Went out of my way to locate items for customers
~Worked to provide a customer friendly atmosphere
Marketing
~Worked at Ruby Tuesday for 14 months
~Help to sale new menu items to the ideal target markets
~Portray myself in the friendliest way possible
~Create an atmosphere that makes people want to return
Communication
~Work at Tiger paw productions street team at Littlejohn
~Talk to managers of restaurants, gas stations, small stores to make relations
~Explain to the community what concerts are going to take place
EMPLOYNMENT HISTORY
Clemson University Tiger paw productions, Clemson, South Carolina
Street Team member February 2007-Present
Ruby Tuesday, Clemson, South Carolina
Waitress May 2006-Present
Meredith College phoneathon, Raleigh, North Carolina
Alumni Relations Caller June 2005-August 2005
The Gap, Durham, North Carolina
Sales Representative October 2004-January 2005
Seven Oaks Athletic Club May 2000-August 2000
Lifeguard May 2001-August 2001
ADVICE LETTER~~~~~~
Dear __________,
I am currently a senior at Clemson University in South Carolina majoring in marketing with a minor in communication studies. When I graduate in the spring I will pursue looking for a job in the field of real estate. I am writing to you in hopes of meeting with you for twenty minutes. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity of going over my resume with you and your feedback on how I compare to your recent hires. Next week I will be contacting your office in hopes of setting up an appointment with you.
Best Regards,
Kristin Sutter
THANK YOU LETTER~~~~~~
Dear__________,
Thank you so much for giving you some of valuable time. I really appreciated the chance to talk to you about my resume and the qualifications needed by your future employees. The information that you gave me is going to be very helpful to me when I am looking for a job.
Best Regards,
Kristin Sutter
ksutter@clemson.edu
104 Sumter Court Apt-I 9420 Bridle Spur
Central, SC 29630 Chapel Hill, NC 27516
(919) 302-1974 (919) 933-7239
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a job in the field of real estate utilizing my skills in customer relations, marketing, and communication.
EDUCATION
Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, minor in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, South Carolina
May 2008 GPA: 3.0
REAL ESTATE SKILLS
Customer Relations
~Worked in customer service at The Gap for three months
~Helped customers to find what they were looking for
~Helped unsatisfied customers to become satisfied
~Went out of my way to locate items for customers
~Worked to provide a customer friendly atmosphere
Marketing
~Worked at Ruby Tuesday for 14 months
~Help to sale new menu items to the ideal target markets
~Portray myself in the friendliest way possible
~Create an atmosphere that makes people want to return
Communication
~Work at Tiger paw productions street team at Littlejohn
~Talk to managers of restaurants, gas stations, small stores to make relations
~Explain to the community what concerts are going to take place
EMPLOYNMENT HISTORY
Clemson University Tiger paw productions, Clemson, South Carolina
Street Team member February 2007-Present
Ruby Tuesday, Clemson, South Carolina
Waitress May 2006-Present
Meredith College phoneathon, Raleigh, North Carolina
Alumni Relations Caller June 2005-August 2005
The Gap, Durham, North Carolina
Sales Representative October 2004-January 2005
Seven Oaks Athletic Club May 2000-August 2000
Lifeguard May 2001-August 2001
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kristin A. Sutter
ksutter@clemson.edu
104 Sumter Court Apt-I 9420 Bridle Spur
Central, SC 29630 Chapel Hill, NC 27516
(919) 302-1974 (919) 933-7239
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a job in the field of marketing utilizing my education from Clemson University and my skills in customer relations, marketing, and communication.
EDUCATION
Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, minor in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, South Carolina
May 2008 GPA: 3.0
REAL ESTATE SKILLS
Customer Relations
~Worked in customer service at The Gap for three months
~Helped customers to find what they were looking for
~Helped unsatisfied customers to become satisfied
~Went out of my way to locate items for customers
~Worked to provide a customer friendly atmosphere
Marketing
~Worked at Ruby Tuesday for 14 months
~Help to sale new menu items to the ideal target markets
~Portray myself in the friendliest way possible
~Create an atmosphere that makes people want to return
Communication
~Work at Tiger paw productions street team at Littlejohn
~Talk to managers of restaurants, gas stations, small stores to make relations
~Explain to the community what concerts are going to take place
EMPLOYNMENT HISTORY
Clemson University Tiger paw productions, Clemson, South Carolina
Street Team member February 2007-Present
Ruby Tuesday, Clemson, South Carolina
Waitress May 2006-Present
Meredith College phoneathon, Raleigh, North Carolina
Alumni Relations Caller June 2005-August 2005
The Gap, Durham, North Carolina
Sales Representative October 2004-January 2005
Seven Oaks Athletic Club May 2000-August 2000
Lifeguard May 2001-August 2001
ADVICE LETTER~~~~~~
Dear __________,
I am currently a senior at Clemson University in South Carolina majoring in marketing with a minor in communication studies. When I graduate in the spring I will pursue looking for a job in the field of real estate. I am writing to you in hopes of meeting with you for twenty minutes. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity of going over my resume with you and your feedback on how I compare to your recent hires. Next week I will be contacting your office in hopes of setting up an appointment with you.
Best Regards,
Kristin Sutter
THANK YOU LETTER~~~~~~
Dear__________,
Thank you so much for giving you some of valuable time. I really appreciated the chance to talk to you about my resume and the qualifications needed by your future employees. The information that you gave me is going to be very helpful to me when I am looking for a job.
Best Regards,
Kristin Sutter
posted by KRISTINSUTTER at 6/15/2007 04:54:00 PM
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Question about Job search documents due tomorrow
Are we supposed to email you the job search documents due tomorrow?
posted by Emmanuel at 6/15/2007 12:09:00 PM
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Thursday, June 14, 2007
Response to Emmanuel
Your resume and letters were very good. The only thing that I was questioning was the informality of the letters. I don't really know if they're supposed to be formal or not? If they are, then it might be better to end the letters with something other than 'thanks'. That was the only that really saw for improvement. Other than that, they are direct and contain all the necessary information. Good job!
posted by Lindsay Merrill at 6/14/2007 09:06:00 PM
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Response To Matt
I think the formatting of your resumes are very good and professional. It is good that you have some experience in your field already. In your contact letter make sure you look over some of the spelling. Other than that everything looks good in your letters and resumes.
posted by Emmanuel at 6/14/2007 06:42:00 PM
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Question for T.F.
I am meeting with my Interior Designer on Tuesday morning for my job search meeting. I am leaving the country immediately after my meeting. Is there anything that I will need to turn in as far as the meeting goes? Or anything after that (final project?)?
posted by hilarylane at 6/14/2007 05:05:00 PM
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Response to Lindsay
Your letters are very professional & well spoken. The only thing I saw was that in the second letter you have exceeding & I think it should be exceeded. Otherwise, your letters are awesome!
posted by hilarylane at 6/14/2007 04:11:00 PM
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Response to Hilary's resume and letter
I thought that your resume was good, but when you get to the letters there are a few problems that I noticed. There are a few words that don't have spaces in between them and I think that you should write out what HGTC is. You also forgot to add your disclaimer in the advice letter. I think that you did a great job.
posted by kimrhoads at 6/14/2007 02:34:00 PM
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Wednesday, June 13, 2007
2 Resumes and Letters
Lindsay Merrill
lmerril@clemson.edu
Current Address: 155 Old Greenville Hwy • Apt#315 • Clemson, South Carolina 29631• (386) 316-7779
Permanent Address: 4 Mystic Lake Way • Ormond Beach • Florida 32174 • (386) 677-5208
________________________________________________________________________
OBJECTIVE To obtain a position in the communications field, emphasizing Journalism, utilizing my education and work experience.
EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, SC
Minor: Social Cluster May 2008 GPA: 3.0/4.0
WORK Maui Nix Surf Shop, Daytona Beach, Florida
EXPERIENCE Sales Associate Summer 2005
• Maintained a clean store for customers.
• Organized retail upon arrival.
• Sold and advertised store products.
• Operated cash register under manager.
Ormond Beach YMCA, Ormond Beach, Florida
Swim Instructor Summer 2004
• Educated children ages 5-7 on basic fundamentals of swimming on their own.
• Promoted safety in the pool as well as important daily values.
• Monitored children’s progress throughout the duration of the summer camp.
Seabreeze Varsity Cheerleading, Daytona Beach, Florida
Coach Summer 2002-2003
• Instructed girls ages 3-12 cheerleading, dance, tumbling, and stunting skills.
• Arranged schedules for each day of camp.
• Designed routines for the girls to learn and model.
Embry-Riddle Basketball Camp, Ormond Beach, Florida
Instructor Summer 2002
• Taught children ages 5-7 the basic game of basketball.
• Coordinated 3-on-3 and 5-on-5 basketball games.
• Prepared agility lessons for all age groups.
ORGANIZATIONS Member of Kappa Delta sorority Fall 2004-Present
• Member of IPTAY Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Student Alumni Association Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Sport Plus Fall 2006
VOLUNTEER Girl Scouts Fall 2004-Present
WORK Attend meetings in the area
• Teach and promote the Dove Campaign
Prevent Child Abuse America Fall 2004-Present
• Coordinate a Shamrock event to raise money for
Abused families/children
• Contact local companies to donate money
Clemson University Redfern Health Center Fall 2004-Spring 2006
• Posted signs around campus promoting smart health.
• Facilitated a Christmas party for foster home.
• Assisted in the Health Education center.
Solid Green: Adopt-a-Spot Fall 2006
• Cleaned up a polluted section of Downtown
Clemson.
Ormond Beach Pop Warner Cheerleaders Fall 2002-Fall 2004
• Coached the junior midget squad.
• Helped for competitions and games.
Lindsay Merrill
lmerril@clemson.edu
Current Address: 155 Old Greenville Hwy • Apt#315 • Clemson, South Carolina 29631• (386) 316-7779
Permanent Address: 4 Mystic Lake Way • Ormond Beach • Florida 32174 • (386) 677-5208
________________________________________________________________________
OBJECTIVE To obtain a position in the sports communication field utilizing my education and work experience.
EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, SC
Minor: Social Cluster May 2008 GPA: 3.0/4.0
WORK Maui Nix Surf Shop, Daytona Beach, Florida
EXPERIENCE Sales Associate Summer 2005
• Maintained a clean store for customers.
• Organized retail upon arrival.
• Sold and advertised store products.
• Operated cash register under manager.
Ormond Beach YMCA, Ormond Beach, Florida
Swim Instructor Summer 2004
• Educated children ages 5-7 on basic fundamentals of swimming on their own.
• Promoted safety in the pool as well as important daily values.
• Monitored children’s progress throughout the duration of the summer camp.
Seabreeze Varsity Cheerleading, Daytona Beach, Florida
Coach Summer 2002-2003
• Instructed girls ages 3-12 cheerleading, dance, tumbling, and stunting skills.
• Arranged schedules for each day of camp.
• Designed routines for the girls to learn and model.
Embry-Riddle Basketball Camp, Ormond Beach, Florida
Instructor Summer 2002
• Taught children ages 5-7 the basic game of basketball.
• Coordinated 3-on-3 and 5-on-5 basketball games.
• Prepared agility lessons for all age groups.
ORGANIZATIONS Member of Kappa Delta sorority Fall 2004-Present
• Member of IPTAY Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Student Alumni Association Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Sport Plus Fall 2006
VOLUNTEER Girl Scouts Fall 2004-Present
WORK Attend meetings in the area
• Teach and promote the Dove Campaign
Prevent Child Abuse America Fall 2004-Present
• Coordinate a Shamrock event to raise money for
Abused families/children
• Contact local companies to donate money
Clemson University Redfern Health Center Fall 2004-Spring 2006
• Posted signs around campus promoting smart health.
• Facilitated a Christmas party for foster home.
• Assisted in the Health Education center.
Solid Green: Adopt-a-Spot Fall 2006
• Cleaned up a polluted section of Downtown
Clemson.
Ormond Beach Pop Warner Cheerleaders Fall 2002-Fall 2004
• Coached the junior midget squad.
• Helped for competitions and games.
155 Old Greenville Highway #315
Clemson, SC 29632
June 13, 2007
Dear______,
I am currently a senior at Clemson University as a communication studies major. As I am looking forward to obtaining a job after graduation, I was wondering if I could meet with you to discuss information that would be helpful to my receiving a position in the communication studies field. You being in a high position, I trust your advice will be useful to reinforce my confidence in doing so. Please be aware that I am not asking for an interview or a position with your company, instead I am looking for an advice and information meeting to help me enter the work force as a communications professional. I will contact you soon to arrange a compromising meeting time. I look forward to meeting with you.
Best regards,
Lindsay Merrill
155 Old Greenville Highway
Clemson, SC 29632
June 13, 2007
Dear____,
I would like to take this time to say thank you for meeting with me. I am positive that your advice will be a key element as I begin the process of obtaining a position in the communications field. I am pleased to say that the information received from this meeting exceeding my expectations. With your help, I am now confident in my preparation for the application process. Once again, thank you and it was a pleasure meeting with you.
Best Regards,
Lindsay Merrill
lmerril@clemson.edu
Current Address: 155 Old Greenville Hwy • Apt#315 • Clemson, South Carolina 29631• (386) 316-7779
Permanent Address: 4 Mystic Lake Way • Ormond Beach • Florida 32174 • (386) 677-5208
________________________________________________________________________
OBJECTIVE To obtain a position in the communications field, emphasizing Journalism, utilizing my education and work experience.
EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, SC
Minor: Social Cluster May 2008 GPA: 3.0/4.0
WORK Maui Nix Surf Shop, Daytona Beach, Florida
EXPERIENCE Sales Associate Summer 2005
• Maintained a clean store for customers.
• Organized retail upon arrival.
• Sold and advertised store products.
• Operated cash register under manager.
Ormond Beach YMCA, Ormond Beach, Florida
Swim Instructor Summer 2004
• Educated children ages 5-7 on basic fundamentals of swimming on their own.
• Promoted safety in the pool as well as important daily values.
• Monitored children’s progress throughout the duration of the summer camp.
Seabreeze Varsity Cheerleading, Daytona Beach, Florida
Coach Summer 2002-2003
• Instructed girls ages 3-12 cheerleading, dance, tumbling, and stunting skills.
• Arranged schedules for each day of camp.
• Designed routines for the girls to learn and model.
Embry-Riddle Basketball Camp, Ormond Beach, Florida
Instructor Summer 2002
• Taught children ages 5-7 the basic game of basketball.
• Coordinated 3-on-3 and 5-on-5 basketball games.
• Prepared agility lessons for all age groups.
ORGANIZATIONS Member of Kappa Delta sorority Fall 2004-Present
• Member of IPTAY Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Student Alumni Association Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Sport Plus Fall 2006
VOLUNTEER Girl Scouts Fall 2004-Present
WORK Attend meetings in the area
• Teach and promote the Dove Campaign
Prevent Child Abuse America Fall 2004-Present
• Coordinate a Shamrock event to raise money for
Abused families/children
• Contact local companies to donate money
Clemson University Redfern Health Center Fall 2004-Spring 2006
• Posted signs around campus promoting smart health.
• Facilitated a Christmas party for foster home.
• Assisted in the Health Education center.
Solid Green: Adopt-a-Spot Fall 2006
• Cleaned up a polluted section of Downtown
Clemson.
Ormond Beach Pop Warner Cheerleaders Fall 2002-Fall 2004
• Coached the junior midget squad.
• Helped for competitions and games.
Lindsay Merrill
lmerril@clemson.edu
Current Address: 155 Old Greenville Hwy • Apt#315 • Clemson, South Carolina 29631• (386) 316-7779
Permanent Address: 4 Mystic Lake Way • Ormond Beach • Florida 32174 • (386) 677-5208
________________________________________________________________________
OBJECTIVE To obtain a position in the sports communication field utilizing my education and work experience.
EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, SC
Minor: Social Cluster May 2008 GPA: 3.0/4.0
WORK Maui Nix Surf Shop, Daytona Beach, Florida
EXPERIENCE Sales Associate Summer 2005
• Maintained a clean store for customers.
• Organized retail upon arrival.
• Sold and advertised store products.
• Operated cash register under manager.
Ormond Beach YMCA, Ormond Beach, Florida
Swim Instructor Summer 2004
• Educated children ages 5-7 on basic fundamentals of swimming on their own.
• Promoted safety in the pool as well as important daily values.
• Monitored children’s progress throughout the duration of the summer camp.
Seabreeze Varsity Cheerleading, Daytona Beach, Florida
Coach Summer 2002-2003
• Instructed girls ages 3-12 cheerleading, dance, tumbling, and stunting skills.
• Arranged schedules for each day of camp.
• Designed routines for the girls to learn and model.
Embry-Riddle Basketball Camp, Ormond Beach, Florida
Instructor Summer 2002
• Taught children ages 5-7 the basic game of basketball.
• Coordinated 3-on-3 and 5-on-5 basketball games.
• Prepared agility lessons for all age groups.
ORGANIZATIONS Member of Kappa Delta sorority Fall 2004-Present
• Member of IPTAY Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Student Alumni Association Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Sport Plus Fall 2006
VOLUNTEER Girl Scouts Fall 2004-Present
WORK Attend meetings in the area
• Teach and promote the Dove Campaign
Prevent Child Abuse America Fall 2004-Present
• Coordinate a Shamrock event to raise money for
Abused families/children
• Contact local companies to donate money
Clemson University Redfern Health Center Fall 2004-Spring 2006
• Posted signs around campus promoting smart health.
• Facilitated a Christmas party for foster home.
• Assisted in the Health Education center.
Solid Green: Adopt-a-Spot Fall 2006
• Cleaned up a polluted section of Downtown
Clemson.
Ormond Beach Pop Warner Cheerleaders Fall 2002-Fall 2004
• Coached the junior midget squad.
• Helped for competitions and games.
155 Old Greenville Highway #315
Clemson, SC 29632
June 13, 2007
Dear______,
I am currently a senior at Clemson University as a communication studies major. As I am looking forward to obtaining a job after graduation, I was wondering if I could meet with you to discuss information that would be helpful to my receiving a position in the communication studies field. You being in a high position, I trust your advice will be useful to reinforce my confidence in doing so. Please be aware that I am not asking for an interview or a position with your company, instead I am looking for an advice and information meeting to help me enter the work force as a communications professional. I will contact you soon to arrange a compromising meeting time. I look forward to meeting with you.
Best regards,
Lindsay Merrill
155 Old Greenville Highway
Clemson, SC 29632
June 13, 2007
Dear____,
I would like to take this time to say thank you for meeting with me. I am positive that your advice will be a key element as I begin the process of obtaining a position in the communications field. I am pleased to say that the information received from this meeting exceeding my expectations. With your help, I am now confident in my preparation for the application process. Once again, thank you and it was a pleasure meeting with you.
Best Regards,
Lindsay Merrill
posted by Lindsay Merrill at 6/13/2007 07:34:00 PM
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2 Resumes and letters
Letter of Intent
Matthew Wilson
104 Water Oak Ln.
Central, SC 29630
(843) 412-8476
Ralf Haist
Senior Packaging Engineer
Bosch Corporation
4421 Highway 81 North
Anderson, SC 29621
June 13, 2007
Dear Ralf,
I am a senior at Clemson University majoring in Packaging Science. I am contacting you in hopes that you could meet with me briefly so that I can ask you some questions about preparing myself for a job in the area of Packaging. I am not asking you about a position with you company, I would just like you to give me some advice that will help me prepare myself for finding a job when I graduate. I will contact you in the near future to set up an appointment that fits your schedule so we can meet in person. Thank you for you time and I will be in contact.
Best Regards,
Matthew Wilson
Thank you Letter
Matthew Wilson
104 Water Oak Ln.
Central, SC 29630
(843) 412-8476
Ralf Haist
Senior Packaging Engineer
Bosch Corporation
4421 Highway 81 North
Anderson, SC 29621
June 13, 2007
Dear Ralf,
I want to thank your very much for taking the time to meet and discuss ways to prepare for finding a job. I enjoyed meeting you and learning more about packaging science. The interview provided me with a great deal of information that will come in handy when I graduate and start looking for a job. I feel like my education is significant and I will contribute greatly to any company that would like me to work for them. Thank you for the interview and advice you have given me.
Best regards,
Matthew Wilson
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/13/2007 06:11:00 PM
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Two Resumes and Letters
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer with a concentration in ceramic development.
Education
Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
Expected Graduation May 2009
Clemson University
Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
Special Olympics
United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
General Office Skills
Report Preparation
Group Worker
Computer Literate
Computer Skills
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Microsoft Powerpoint
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer with a concentration in ceramic development.
Education
Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
Expected Graduation May 2009
Clemson University
Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
Special Olympics
United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
General Office Skills
Report Preparation
Group Worker
Computer Literate
Computer Skills
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Microsoft Powerpoint
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer.
Education
•Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
•Expected Graduation May 2009
•Clemson University
•Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
•Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
•Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
•Special Olympics
•United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
•Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
•General Office Skills
•Report Preparation
•Group Worker
•Computer Literate
Computer Skills
•Microsoft Word
•Microsoft Excel
•Microsoft Powerpoint
Advice letter
Dear_______,
I am writing to you because I was hoping I could take 20 minutes of your time and meet with you regarding getting information and asking you questions so that I can prepare myself for my future career in materials engineering. I am not trying to get a position at your company rather I am trying to better prepare myself for the job market once I graduate, and I was hoping that you could help me with this. I will be contacting your office next week in hope of setting up an appointment with you.
Thanks,
Emmanuel Twum
Thank you letter
Dear_____
Thank you for allowing me to spend a few minutes with helping me to go over information that will help me in my future job search. The information you have given me will be very helpful in helping me to get a job once I graduate. Again thank you for your time.
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer with a concentration in ceramic development.
Education
Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
Expected Graduation May 2009
Clemson University
Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
Special Olympics
United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
General Office Skills
Report Preparation
Group Worker
Computer Literate
Computer Skills
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Microsoft Powerpoint
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer with a concentration in ceramic development.
Education
Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
Expected Graduation May 2009
Clemson University
Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
Special Olympics
United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
General Office Skills
Report Preparation
Group Worker
Computer Literate
Computer Skills
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Microsoft Powerpoint
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer.
Education
•Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
•Expected Graduation May 2009
•Clemson University
•Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
•Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
•Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
•Special Olympics
•United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
•Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
•General Office Skills
•Report Preparation
•Group Worker
•Computer Literate
Computer Skills
•Microsoft Word
•Microsoft Excel
•Microsoft Powerpoint
Advice letter
Dear_______,
I am writing to you because I was hoping I could take 20 minutes of your time and meet with you regarding getting information and asking you questions so that I can prepare myself for my future career in materials engineering. I am not trying to get a position at your company rather I am trying to better prepare myself for the job market once I graduate, and I was hoping that you could help me with this. I will be contacting your office next week in hope of setting up an appointment with you.
Thanks,
Emmanuel Twum
Thank you letter
Dear_____
Thank you for allowing me to spend a few minutes with helping me to go over information that will help me in my future job search. The information you have given me will be very helpful in helping me to get a job once I graduate. Again thank you for your time.
Emmanuel Twum
posted by Emmanuel at 6/13/2007 04:17:00 PM
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2 resumes and 2 letters
Kimberly Nicole Rhoads
(843)-858-4822
Objective
A position as a high school biology teacher
Education
Bachelor of Science in Science Teaching: Biology, expected May 2009
High School Diploma, May 2005,
Hall of Fame
Employment Experience
Retail
CVS Pharmacy, Hartsville and
Cashier and photo lab associate: Dealt with customer service issues, and used all required photo lab and cashier technology
Hollywood Video,
Guest Services Representative: Soothed disgruntled customers organized promotional and retail merchandise
Other
Work Study Economics Department: Managed my own time, used required office equipment
Activities
Tutoring at a local middle school and volunteering at my high school
References
Available upon request
Kimberly Nicole Rhoads
Home School (August to May)
(843)-858-4822
Objective
A position as a high school biology teacher with an interest in human anatomy.
Education
Bachelor of Science in Science Teaching: Biology, expected May 2009,
High School Diploma, May 2005,
Hall of Fame
Employment Experience
Retail
CVS Pharmacy, Hartsville and
Cashier and photo lab associate: Dealt with customer service issues, and used all required photo lab and cashier technology
Hollywood Video,
Guest Services Representative: Soothed disgruntled customers organized promotional and retail merchandise
Other
Work Study Economics Department: Managed my own time, used required office equipment
Computer Skills
Software: FrontPage, Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Photoshop, Kodak Software, Mail Merge Inspiration, and iMovie
Projects: WebQuest, designing webpages, Excel grade book, photo editing, tracking, and personalized newsletters
Activities
Tutoring at a local middle school and volunteering at my high school
References
Available upon request
June 13, 2007
Dr. B. Jane Hursey
Dear Dr. Hursey
My name is Kimberly Rhoads and I am a junior at
I am writing you this letter in the hopes that we could have a short meeting where I could show you my resume and ask you for any advice that you have for someone seeking a career in secondary education. Please Understand: that I am not requesting a position in the school district I am just asking for any advice that you have for someone in my position.
I will contact your office next week to set up an appointment via the telephone, in hopes of making an appointment to sit down with you. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Kimberly Rhoads
June 13, 2007
Dr. B. Jane Hursey
Dear Dr. Hursey
My name is Kimberly Rhoads and I contacted you in the hopes of having a meeting to discuss my resume and any advice that you may have for someone going into my desired profession.
I just wanted to thank you again for your time and the advice that you have given me, I am sure that this will be greatly beneficial to me as I begin to search for a job in the education field. Thank you again.
Sincerely,
Kimberly Rhoads
posted by kimrhoads at 6/13/2007 03:00:00 PM
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2 Resumes & Letters
Resume #1:
Hilary L. Johnson
Objective
To organize and handle all financial records and management aspects of a design-related business.
Experience
2004-present Conch Cafe Garden City Beach, SC
Hostess, Server
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
· Managing customer’s restaurant experience by timing food and drink delivery.
· Responsible for kitchen set up and break down/clean up, taking orders, serving food, accommodating to customer needs.
· Experience in handling money and making change. Proficient knowledge in running a computer and working with credit card transactions.
2006-2007 Clemson University Cooper Library Clemson, SC
Office Assistant for Acquisitions/Receiving
· Responsible for doing secretarial duties, such as filing, organizing invoices, checking in journals, and running errands.
· Check in, shelve, and organize journals.
2006-present Mark & Jeannie Foster Pendleton, SC
Childcare
· Responsible for the well-being of three children, ages 2, 3, and 8.
2006 Spud’s Waterfront Dining Murrells Inlet, SC
Server
· Responsible for kitchen set up and break down/clean up, taking orders, serving food, accommodating to customer needs.
· Experience in handling money, making change, working with computers, and handling credit card transactions.
2004-2005 Rack Room Shoes Myrtle Beach, SC
Seasonal Help: Sales
· Responsible for helping customers, organizing shelves, watching for and preventing theft.
· Experience in handling money, making change, and using a cash register.
2003-2004 Carolina Castles Inc. Myrtle Beach, SC
Intern
· Learned computer programs such as Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, and CADD.
· Completed a set of blueprints and drawings for a residential building.
2003-2004 Outback Steakhouse Murrells Inlet, SC
Hostess
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
· Responsible for restroom cleanliness and set up/break down of lobby area.
2002 Ice Creams and Coffee Beans Myrtle Beach, SC
Sales
· Responsible for making coffee, serving food, helping customers, store cleanliness.
· Experience in handling money, making change, and using a cash register.
2001-2003 Wild Water & Wheels Surfside Beach , SC
Lifeguard
· Red Cross Lifeguard Certification
· Red Cross CPR Certification
· Red Cross First Aid Certification
· Responsible for the safety of swimmers and cleanliness of the water park.
Education
2004-present Clemson University Clemson, SC
· Pursuing a Business Management Degree.
· Active sister of Gamma Sigma Sigma service sorority.
· Fall 2007: Intramural Sports Chairperson for Gamma Sigma Sigma.
· Spring 2007: Public Relations Officer of Gamma Sigma Sigma.
2000-2004 Socastee High School Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a High School Diploma.
2002-2004 Academy for the Arts, Science, and Technology Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a certificate of completion in the Pre-Engineering program.
· 2003-2004 Student Body Treasurer.
· 2003-2004 Member of the Orientation Committee. Responsible for guiding tours of prospective students and organizing student orientation.
· 2003-2004 Horry County Service Learning representative for the Pre-Engineering major. Responsible for documenting any community service activities performed by Pre-Engineering majors.
· Completion of a Senior Mastery of Exhibition and internship in the field of architecture.
Interests
· 2003-2004 Living Faith Church Youth Council Member
· Other interests: Surfing, Reading, Art
Resume #2
Hilary L. Johnson
Objective
To acquire a distinguished position as a designer in the interior design field.
Experience
2004-present Conch Cafe Garden City Beach, SC
Hostess, Server
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
2006-2007 Clemson University Cooper Library Clemson, SC
Office Assistant for Acquisitions/Receiving
· Responsible for doing secretarial duties, such as filing, organizing invoices, checking in journals, and running errands.
· Check in, shelve, and organize journals.
2006-present Mark & Jeannie Foster Pendleton, SC
Childcare
· Responsible for the well being of three children, ages 2, 3, and 8.
· Organized entertaining activities and art projects for the children.
2003-2004 Carolina Castles Inc. Myrtle Beach, SC
Intern
· Learned computer programs such as Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, and CADD.
· Completed a set of blueprints and drawings for a residential building.
· Studied various architecture styles including Neoclassical, Venetian, Eclectic, and Spanish styles.
2001-2003 Wild Water & Wheels Surfside Beach , SC
Lifeguard
· Red Cross Lifeguard Certification
· Red Cross CPR Certification
· Red Cross First Aid Certification
· Responsible for the safety of swimmers and cleanliness of the water park.
Education
2004-present Clemson University Clemson, SC
· Pursuing a Business Management Degree.
· Active sister of Gamma Sigma Sigma service sorority.
· Fall 2007: Intramural Sports Chairperson for Gamma Sigma Sigma.
· Spring 2007: Public Relations Officer of Gamma Sigma Sigma: designed shirts, hats, and party favors.
2000-2004 Socastee High School Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a High School Diploma.
2002-2004 Academy for the Arts, Science, and Technology Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a certificate of completion in the Pre-Engineering program.
· 2003-2004 Student Body Treasurer.
· 2003-2004 Member of the Orientation Committee. Responsible for guiding tours of prospective students and organizing student orientation.
· 2003-2004 Horry County Service Learning representative for the Pre-Engineering major. Responsible for documenting any community service activities performed by Pre-Engineering majors.
· Completion of a Senior Mastery of Exhibition and internship in the field of architecture.
Interests
· 1998-2004 Fast Pitch Softball. Teams include: Surfside Beach Recreation, Calvary Christian School, Carolina Styx, Surfside Beach Stingrays.
· 2002-2004 Marla’s School of Dance Competitive Dance Team
· Other interests: Surfing, Reading, Art
Letter Requesting Advice/Info:
Ms. Rizzo-Hansen,
I am currently a Senior at Clemson University. I will graduate in May withmy Bachelor's degree in Business Management. After graduation, I plan to enroll in HGTC's Interior Design Certification program, and work in theInterior Design field. I am currently working on building my resume, and I would find it a great asset to sit down with you for about twenty minutes and discuss with you what exactly an Interior Designer looks for when hiring. I would greatly appreciate your opinion and input. Would you be willing to meet with me sometime this week or the beginning of next week?
Thank you for your time.
Hilary Johnson
Thank you letter:
Dear __________,
Thank you so very much for allowing me to spend a couple of minutes with you this week to learn more about the field of Interior Design. I consider it a great asset to have throughout my job search. In the future, I hope you will consider me if you have an open position with your company. Again, thank you for your time!
Hilary Johnson
Hilary L. Johnson
Objective
To organize and handle all financial records and management aspects of a design-related business.
Experience
2004-present Conch Cafe Garden City Beach, SC
Hostess, Server
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
· Managing customer’s restaurant experience by timing food and drink delivery.
· Responsible for kitchen set up and break down/clean up, taking orders, serving food, accommodating to customer needs.
· Experience in handling money and making change. Proficient knowledge in running a computer and working with credit card transactions.
2006-2007 Clemson University Cooper Library Clemson, SC
Office Assistant for Acquisitions/Receiving
· Responsible for doing secretarial duties, such as filing, organizing invoices, checking in journals, and running errands.
· Check in, shelve, and organize journals.
2006-present Mark & Jeannie Foster Pendleton, SC
Childcare
· Responsible for the well-being of three children, ages 2, 3, and 8.
2006 Spud’s Waterfront Dining Murrells Inlet, SC
Server
· Responsible for kitchen set up and break down/clean up, taking orders, serving food, accommodating to customer needs.
· Experience in handling money, making change, working with computers, and handling credit card transactions.
2004-2005 Rack Room Shoes Myrtle Beach, SC
Seasonal Help: Sales
· Responsible for helping customers, organizing shelves, watching for and preventing theft.
· Experience in handling money, making change, and using a cash register.
2003-2004 Carolina Castles Inc. Myrtle Beach, SC
Intern
· Learned computer programs such as Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, and CADD.
· Completed a set of blueprints and drawings for a residential building.
2003-2004 Outback Steakhouse Murrells Inlet, SC
Hostess
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
· Responsible for restroom cleanliness and set up/break down of lobby area.
2002 Ice Creams and Coffee Beans Myrtle Beach, SC
Sales
· Responsible for making coffee, serving food, helping customers, store cleanliness.
· Experience in handling money, making change, and using a cash register.
2001-2003 Wild Water & Wheels Surfside Beach , SC
Lifeguard
· Red Cross Lifeguard Certification
· Red Cross CPR Certification
· Red Cross First Aid Certification
· Responsible for the safety of swimmers and cleanliness of the water park.
Education
2004-present Clemson University Clemson, SC
· Pursuing a Business Management Degree.
· Active sister of Gamma Sigma Sigma service sorority.
· Fall 2007: Intramural Sports Chairperson for Gamma Sigma Sigma.
· Spring 2007: Public Relations Officer of Gamma Sigma Sigma.
2000-2004 Socastee High School Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a High School Diploma.
2002-2004 Academy for the Arts, Science, and Technology Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a certificate of completion in the Pre-Engineering program.
· 2003-2004 Student Body Treasurer.
· 2003-2004 Member of the Orientation Committee. Responsible for guiding tours of prospective students and organizing student orientation.
· 2003-2004 Horry County Service Learning representative for the Pre-Engineering major. Responsible for documenting any community service activities performed by Pre-Engineering majors.
· Completion of a Senior Mastery of Exhibition and internship in the field of architecture.
Interests
· 2003-2004 Living Faith Church Youth Council Member
· Other interests: Surfing, Reading, Art
Resume #2
Hilary L. Johnson
Objective
To acquire a distinguished position as a designer in the interior design field.
Experience
2004-present Conch Cafe Garden City Beach, SC
Hostess, Server
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
2006-2007 Clemson University Cooper Library Clemson, SC
Office Assistant for Acquisitions/Receiving
· Responsible for doing secretarial duties, such as filing, organizing invoices, checking in journals, and running errands.
· Check in, shelve, and organize journals.
2006-present Mark & Jeannie Foster Pendleton, SC
Childcare
· Responsible for the well being of three children, ages 2, 3, and 8.
· Organized entertaining activities and art projects for the children.
2003-2004 Carolina Castles Inc. Myrtle Beach, SC
Intern
· Learned computer programs such as Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, and CADD.
· Completed a set of blueprints and drawings for a residential building.
· Studied various architecture styles including Neoclassical, Venetian, Eclectic, and Spanish styles.
2001-2003 Wild Water & Wheels Surfside Beach , SC
Lifeguard
· Red Cross Lifeguard Certification
· Red Cross CPR Certification
· Red Cross First Aid Certification
· Responsible for the safety of swimmers and cleanliness of the water park.
Education
2004-present Clemson University Clemson, SC
· Pursuing a Business Management Degree.
· Active sister of Gamma Sigma Sigma service sorority.
· Fall 2007: Intramural Sports Chairperson for Gamma Sigma Sigma.
· Spring 2007: Public Relations Officer of Gamma Sigma Sigma: designed shirts, hats, and party favors.
2000-2004 Socastee High School Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a High School Diploma.
2002-2004 Academy for the Arts, Science, and Technology Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a certificate of completion in the Pre-Engineering program.
· 2003-2004 Student Body Treasurer.
· 2003-2004 Member of the Orientation Committee. Responsible for guiding tours of prospective students and organizing student orientation.
· 2003-2004 Horry County Service Learning representative for the Pre-Engineering major. Responsible for documenting any community service activities performed by Pre-Engineering majors.
· Completion of a Senior Mastery of Exhibition and internship in the field of architecture.
Interests
· 1998-2004 Fast Pitch Softball. Teams include: Surfside Beach Recreation, Calvary Christian School, Carolina Styx, Surfside Beach Stingrays.
· 2002-2004 Marla’s School of Dance Competitive Dance Team
· Other interests: Surfing, Reading, Art
Letter Requesting Advice/Info:
Ms. Rizzo-Hansen,
I am currently a Senior at Clemson University. I will graduate in May withmy Bachelor's degree in Business Management. After graduation, I plan to enroll in HGTC's Interior Design Certification program, and work in theInterior Design field. I am currently working on building my resume, and I would find it a great asset to sit down with you for about twenty minutes and discuss with you what exactly an Interior Designer looks for when hiring. I would greatly appreciate your opinion and input. Would you be willing to meet with me sometime this week or the beginning of next week?
Thank you for your time.
Hilary Johnson
Thank you letter:
Dear __________,
Thank you so very much for allowing me to spend a couple of minutes with you this week to learn more about the field of Interior Design. I consider it a great asset to have throughout my job search. In the future, I hope you will consider me if you have an open position with your company. Again, thank you for your time!
Hilary Johnson
posted by hilarylane at 6/13/2007 01:14:00 PM
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Tuesday, June 12, 2007
Response to Emmanuel & Matt
Our House sounds like a great organization. I'm not sure what your plan is to help them out, but the idea of the organization is something that is definitely needed. Do those places set up centers where people can bring their kids? Or is it more of a home-run business?
posted by hilarylane at 6/12/2007 08:45:00 PM
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Monday, June 11, 2007
Grades for 1st Drafts of Project #1
If you turned in a first draft of project #1, your grade is now posted on BlackBoard, and you should have received comments from me to help you revise. Obviously, my comments are coming to you a bit late. What we're going to do is talk a bit about the projects today and let you have the opportunity to ask questions, then you can have time to revise again.
To remind you of the process: **When you revise, your new grade **REPLACES** your draft grade. My intent is to reward you for what you learn, not penalize you for where you start out, so if your grade is not what you want (and it usually isn't) you get to work on it and make it what you want.
I mentioned this at the beginning of class, but it usually bears repeating after the first grades are posted: I understand that this course has different writing demands than most of your courses. You have to learn a completely different skillset, and you have to figure things out on your own. That is why we have the drafting system--so that you get to take a stab at it, then get feedback, then try again. (Better to do that here, in class, than on your job.)
If you have questions, let me know. See you in just a bit.
T. F.
To remind you of the process: **When you revise, your new grade **REPLACES** your draft grade. My intent is to reward you for what you learn, not penalize you for where you start out, so if your grade is not what you want (and it usually isn't) you get to work on it and make it what you want.
I mentioned this at the beginning of class, but it usually bears repeating after the first grades are posted: I understand that this course has different writing demands than most of your courses. You have to learn a completely different skillset, and you have to figure things out on your own. That is why we have the drafting system--so that you get to take a stab at it, then get feedback, then try again. (Better to do that here, in class, than on your job.)
If you have questions, let me know. See you in just a bit.
T. F.
posted by T. F. at 6/11/2007 07:04:00 AM
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Sunday, June 10, 2007
Resume Rough Draft
Lindsay Merrill
lmerril@clemson.edu
Current Address: 155 Old Greenville Hwy • Apt#315 • Clemson, South Carolina 29631• (386) 316-7779
Permanent Address: 4 Mystic Lake Way • Ormond Beach • Florida 32174 • (386) 677-5208
________________________________________________________________________
OBJECTIVE Seeking a job in the communications field utilizing my education and work experience.
EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, SC
Minor: Social Cluster May 2008 GPA: 3.0/4.0
WORK Maui Nix Surf Shop, Daytona Beach, Florida
EXPERIENCE Sales Associate Summer 2005
• Maintained a clean store for customers.
• Organized retail upon arrival.
• Sold and advertised store products.
• Operated cash register under manager.
Ormond Beach YMCA, Ormond Beach, Florida
Swim Instructor Summer 2004
• Educated children ages 5-7 on basic fundamentals of swimming on their own.
• Promoted safety in the pool as well as important daily values.
• Monitored children’s progress throughout the duration of the summer camp.
Seabreeze Varsity Cheerleading, Daytona Beach, Florida
Coach Summer 2002-2003
• Instructed girls ages 3-12 cheerleading, dance, tumbling, and stunting skills.
• Arranged schedules for each day of camp.
• Designed routines for the girls to learn and model.
Embry-Riddle Basketball Camp, Ormond Beach, Florida
Instructor Summer 2002
• Taught children ages 5-7 the basic game of basketball.
• Coordinated 3-on-3 and 5-on-5 basketball games.
• Prepared agility lessons for all age groups.
ORGANIZATIONS Member of Kappa Delta sorority Fall 2004-Present
• Member of IPTAY Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Student Alumni Association Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Sport Plus Fall 2006
VOLUNTEER Girl Scouts Fall 2004-Present
WORK Attend meetings in the area
• Teach and promote the Dove Campaign
Prevent Child Abuse America Fall 2004-Present
• Coordinate a Shamrock event to raise money for
Abused families/children
• Contact local companies to donate money
Clemson University Redfern Health Center Fall 2004-Spring 2006
• Posted signs around campus promoting smart health.
• Facilitated a Christmas party for foster home.
• Assisted in the Health Education center.
Solid Green: Adopt-a-Spot Fall 2006
• Cleaned up a polluted section of Downtown
Clemson.
Ormond Beach Pop Warner Cheerleaders Fall 2002-Fall 2004
• Coached the junior midget squad.
• Helped for competitions and games.
lmerril@clemson.edu
Current Address: 155 Old Greenville Hwy • Apt#315 • Clemson, South Carolina 29631• (386) 316-7779
Permanent Address: 4 Mystic Lake Way • Ormond Beach • Florida 32174 • (386) 677-5208
________________________________________________________________________
OBJECTIVE Seeking a job in the communications field utilizing my education and work experience.
EDUCATION Bachelor of Science in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, SC
Minor: Social Cluster May 2008 GPA: 3.0/4.0
WORK Maui Nix Surf Shop, Daytona Beach, Florida
EXPERIENCE Sales Associate Summer 2005
• Maintained a clean store for customers.
• Organized retail upon arrival.
• Sold and advertised store products.
• Operated cash register under manager.
Ormond Beach YMCA, Ormond Beach, Florida
Swim Instructor Summer 2004
• Educated children ages 5-7 on basic fundamentals of swimming on their own.
• Promoted safety in the pool as well as important daily values.
• Monitored children’s progress throughout the duration of the summer camp.
Seabreeze Varsity Cheerleading, Daytona Beach, Florida
Coach Summer 2002-2003
• Instructed girls ages 3-12 cheerleading, dance, tumbling, and stunting skills.
• Arranged schedules for each day of camp.
• Designed routines for the girls to learn and model.
Embry-Riddle Basketball Camp, Ormond Beach, Florida
Instructor Summer 2002
• Taught children ages 5-7 the basic game of basketball.
• Coordinated 3-on-3 and 5-on-5 basketball games.
• Prepared agility lessons for all age groups.
ORGANIZATIONS Member of Kappa Delta sorority Fall 2004-Present
• Member of IPTAY Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Student Alumni Association Fall 2004-Present
• Member of Sport Plus Fall 2006
VOLUNTEER Girl Scouts Fall 2004-Present
WORK Attend meetings in the area
• Teach and promote the Dove Campaign
Prevent Child Abuse America Fall 2004-Present
• Coordinate a Shamrock event to raise money for
Abused families/children
• Contact local companies to donate money
Clemson University Redfern Health Center Fall 2004-Spring 2006
• Posted signs around campus promoting smart health.
• Facilitated a Christmas party for foster home.
• Assisted in the Health Education center.
Solid Green: Adopt-a-Spot Fall 2006
• Cleaned up a polluted section of Downtown
Clemson.
Ormond Beach Pop Warner Cheerleaders Fall 2002-Fall 2004
• Coached the junior midget squad.
• Helped for competitions and games.
posted by Lindsay Merrill at 6/10/2007 10:47:00 PM
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Resume
Kristin A. Sutter
ksutter@clemson.edu
104 Sumter Court Apt-I 9420 Bridle Spur
Central, SC 29630 Chapel Hill, NC 27516
(919) 302-1974 (919) 933-7239
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a job in the field of real estate utilizing my skills in customer relations, marketing, and communication.
EDUCATION
Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, minor in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, South Carolina
May 2008 GPA: 3.0
REAL ESTATE SKILLS
Customer Relations
~Worked in customer service at The Gap for three months
~Helped customers to find what they were looking for
~Helped unsatisfied customers to become satisfied
~Went out of my way to locate items for customers
~Worked to provide a customer friendly atmosphere
Marketing
~Worked at Ruby Tuesday for 14 months
~Help to sale new menu items to the ideal target markets
~Portray myself in the friendliest way possible
~Create an atmosphere that makes people want to return
Communication
~Work at Tiger paw productions street team at Littlejohn
~Talk to managers of restaurants, gas stations, small stores to make relations
~Explain to the community what concerts are going to take place
EMPLOYNMENT HISTORY
Clemson University Tiger paw productions, Clemson, South Carolina
Street Team member February 2007-Present
Ruby Tuesday, Clemson, South Carolina
Waitress May 2006-Present
Meredith College phoneathon, Raleigh, North Carolina
Alumni Relations Caller June 2005-August 2005
The Gap, Durham, North Carolina
Sales Representative October 2004-January 2005
Seven Oaks Athletic Club May 2000-August 2000
Lifeguard May 2001-August 2001
ksutter@clemson.edu
104 Sumter Court Apt-I 9420 Bridle Spur
Central, SC 29630 Chapel Hill, NC 27516
(919) 302-1974 (919) 933-7239
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a job in the field of real estate utilizing my skills in customer relations, marketing, and communication.
EDUCATION
Bachelor of Arts in Marketing, minor in Communication Studies, Clemson University, Clemson, South Carolina
May 2008 GPA: 3.0
REAL ESTATE SKILLS
Customer Relations
~Worked in customer service at The Gap for three months
~Helped customers to find what they were looking for
~Helped unsatisfied customers to become satisfied
~Went out of my way to locate items for customers
~Worked to provide a customer friendly atmosphere
Marketing
~Worked at Ruby Tuesday for 14 months
~Help to sale new menu items to the ideal target markets
~Portray myself in the friendliest way possible
~Create an atmosphere that makes people want to return
Communication
~Work at Tiger paw productions street team at Littlejohn
~Talk to managers of restaurants, gas stations, small stores to make relations
~Explain to the community what concerts are going to take place
EMPLOYNMENT HISTORY
Clemson University Tiger paw productions, Clemson, South Carolina
Street Team member February 2007-Present
Ruby Tuesday, Clemson, South Carolina
Waitress May 2006-Present
Meredith College phoneathon, Raleigh, North Carolina
Alumni Relations Caller June 2005-August 2005
The Gap, Durham, North Carolina
Sales Representative October 2004-January 2005
Seven Oaks Athletic Club May 2000-August 2000
Lifeguard May 2001-August 2001
posted by KRISTINSUTTER at 6/10/2007 09:13:00 PM
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Resume
Hilary L. Johnson
Objective
To acquire a distinguished position as an interior designer as well as a fulfilling position as a homemaker.
Experience
2004-present Conch Cafe Garden City Beach, SC
Hostess, Server
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
· Responsible for kitchen set up and break down/clean up, taking orders, serving food, accommodating to customer needs.
· Experience in handling money and making change.
2006-2007 Clemson University Cooper Library Clemson, SC
Office Assistant for Acquisitions/Receiving
· Responsible for doing secretarial duties, such as filing, organizing invoices, checking in journals, and running errands.
· Check in, shelve, and organize journals.
2006-present Mark & Jeannie Foster Pendleton, SC
Childcare
· Responsible for the well being of three children, ages 2, 3, and 8.
2006 Spud’s Waterfront Dining Murrells Inlet, SC
Server
· Responsible for kitchen set up and break down/clean up, taking orders, serving food, accommodating to customer needs.
· Experience in handling money and making change.
2004-2005 Rack Room Shoes Myrtle Beach, SC
Seasonal Help: Sales
· Responsible for helping customers, organizing shelves, watching for and preventing theft.
· Experience in handling money, making change, and using a cash register.
2003-2004 Carolina Castles Inc. Myrtle Beach, SC
Intern
· Learned computer programs such as Microsoft Word, Microsoft PowerPoint, and CADD.
· Completed a set of blueprints and drawings for a residential building.
2003-2004 Outback Steakhouse Murrells Inlet, SC
Hostess
· Responsible for greeting and seating customers, accommodating large parties, taking reservations.
· Responsible for restroom cleanliness and set up/break down of lobby area.
2002 Ice Creams and Coffee Beans Myrtle Beach, SC
Sales
· Responsible for making coffee, serving food, helping customers, store cleanliness.
· Experience in handling money, making change, and using a cash register.
2001-2003 Wild Water & Wheels Surfside Beach , SC
Lifeguard
· Red Cross Lifeguard Certification
· Red Cross CPR Certification
· Red Cross First Aid Certification
· Responsible for the safety of swimmers and cleanliness of the water park.
Education
2004-present Clemson University Clemson, SC
· Pursuing a Business Management Degree.
· Active sister of Gamma Sigma Sigma service sorority.
· Fall 2007: Intramural Sports Chairperson for Gamma Sigma Sigma.
· Spring 2007: Public Relations Officer of Gamma Sigma Sigma.
· Actively attend Fellowship of Christian Athletes.
· Actively attend Newspring Church (in Clemson, SC) and Tabernaculo de Reuniones (in Myrtle Beach, SC).
2000-2004 Socastee High School Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a High School Diploma.
2002-2004 Academy for the Arts, Science, and Technology Myrtle Beach, SC
· Earned a certificate of completion in the Pre-Engineering program.
· 2003-2004 Student Body Treasurer.
· 2003-2004 Member of the Orientation Committee. Responsible for guiding tours of prospective students and organizing student orientation.
· 2003-2004 Horry County Service Learning representative for the Pre-Engineering major. Responsible for documenting any community service activities performed by Pre-Engineering majors.
· Completion of a Senior Mastery of Exhibition and internship in the field of architecture.
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Interests
· 1998-2004 Fast Pitch Softball. Teams include: Surfside Beach Recreation, Calvary Christian School, Carolina Styx, Surfside Beach Stingrays.
· 2002-2004 Marla’s School of Dance Competitive Dance Team
· 2003-2004 Living Faith Church Youth Council Member
· Other interests: Surfing, Reading, Art
posted by hilarylane at 6/10/2007 08:11:00 PM
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Resume
I took a screen shot of mine because i could not get the spacing to work out with it on the blog without rewriting it all over again.
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/10/2007 06:32:00 PM
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My Resume
Emmanuel Twum
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer with a concentration in ceramics.
Education
• Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
• Expected Graduation May 2009
• Clemson University
• Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
• Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
• Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
• Special Olympics
• United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
• Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
• General Office Skills
• Report Preparation
• Group Worker
• Computer Literate
Computer Skills
• Microsoft Word
• Microsoft Excel
• Microsoft Powerpoint
3435 Kingsland Circle
Duluth, Georgia
etwum@clemson.edu
Objective
Gain a position as a materials engineer with a concentration in ceramics.
Education
• Bachelor of Science in Ceramic and Materials Engineering
• Expected Graduation May 2009
• Clemson University
• Clemson, South Carolina
Experience
Office Work
• Seth Twum and Company, CPA 2001-2005
Other
• Clemson Soccer Academy 2005-present
Honors/Awards/Activities
Volunteer Work
• Special Olympics
• United Way Donation Drive
Other Activities
• Clemson Soccer
Skills Summary
• General Office Skills
• Report Preparation
• Group Worker
• Computer Literate
Computer Skills
• Microsoft Word
• Microsoft Excel
• Microsoft Powerpoint
posted by Emmanuel at 6/10/2007 11:58:00 AM
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Resume Rough Draft
Kimberly Nicole Rhoads
Objective
A position as a high school science teacher, preferably with an emphasis in biology.
Education
Bachelor of Science in Science Teaching: Biology, expected May 2009
Employment Experience
Retail
CVS Pharmacy, Hartsville and
Cashier and photo lab associate: stocking, customer service, developing photos, operating a cash register, straightening, and planograms
Hollywood Video,
Guest Services Representative: stocking, alphabetizing, cleaning, operating a cash register, counting down registers, and customer service
Other
Work Study Economics Department: sorting the mail, photo copying, word processing, forming spread sheets, and answering the telephone
Computer Skills
Software: FrontPage, Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Photoshop, Kodak Software, Mail Merge Inspiration, and iMovie
Projects: WebQuest, designing webpages, photo editing, tracking, and personalized newsletters
Activities
Tutoring at local middle school and volunteering at my high school
References
Available upon request
posted by kimrhoads at 6/10/2007 09:59:00 AM
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Saturday, June 09, 2007
Response to Kristin and Kim
I think that the non-profit AIDS organization is a great choice for this project. I like that it is managed by college students and professors. I think that will help to reach out to a broad range of students. I'm sure you both can give great ideas just by being college students yourself. Were you planning on designing a website? Or other forms of advertisement for this organization? Also, bringing celebrities in is always great for awareness. I enjoyed learning about this particular non-profit organization and I look forward to seeing the success that comes from this project!
posted by Lindsay Merrill at 6/09/2007 03:47:00 PM
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Question?
Dr. F.
I was just wondering if you wanted us to post our resume on the webblog just like this question or if you wanted us to email them to you?
Thank you
I was just wondering if you wanted us to post our resume on the webblog just like this question or if you wanted us to email them to you?
Thank you
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/09/2007 03:43:00 PM
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Explanation
Hey everyone.
I am very sorry about not being as responsive as I usually am. Rather than explain in detail, I'm just going to show you, and ask for your understanding.
I promise that I'm working on getting caught up and that I'll find ways of giving you adequate feedback and opportunities for revision. Unfortunately, this is what I've been dealing with since late Tuesday night (early Wednesday morning.)
Luckily, this wasn't my only computer, and I didn't lose anything that you sent me. It's just taking a while for me to get things together.
As I said in the email, no one was hurt, which was a good thing. The stuff I had in the house did not fare as well, but it is only stuff, and can be replaced.
posted by T. F. at 6/09/2007 03:32:00 PM
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Response to Hilary and Lindsay
I read the brief history posted by them and it sounds great that they want to help out the habitat for humanity. They are a really great organization. I think that they are pretty well known and you should not have any problems getting information on them. Since I don’t exactly know what your plan is I cant really point out any thing I could see as a possible pitfall, but I think you will have enough information and be able to do a good job.
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/09/2007 03:28:00 PM
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About revision of Project 1
Hello all,
Things are starting to get back to normal here, so I'm working on your papers. I wanted to let you know what I'm going to do with your first projects--Tech writing in your field.
Since I wasn't able to provide feedback to your first drafts yet, what I'm going to do is give you credit for turning them in, but provide feedback for your second drafts and allow you to revise and turn them in again later this week if you choose. So turn in your revisions today as scheduled, and if you get a grade you're happy with on the draft you turn in today, fine; If you want to revise, that is also fine, and your first grade will be replaced with the grade you earn on the revision. That way, if you didn't end up doing a second draft (because you didn't get my feedback yet) you can still revised based on feedback (with no penalty) or, if you just did an excellent revision on your own, you can now be done. That seems fairest, since I wasn't able to get them back yet. (I'm going to post my reason for that in just a bit, after I work up to looking at the pictures.)
-T. F.
Things are starting to get back to normal here, so I'm working on your papers. I wanted to let you know what I'm going to do with your first projects--Tech writing in your field.
Since I wasn't able to provide feedback to your first drafts yet, what I'm going to do is give you credit for turning them in, but provide feedback for your second drafts and allow you to revise and turn them in again later this week if you choose. So turn in your revisions today as scheduled, and if you get a grade you're happy with on the draft you turn in today, fine; If you want to revise, that is also fine, and your first grade will be replaced with the grade you earn on the revision. That way, if you didn't end up doing a second draft (because you didn't get my feedback yet) you can still revised based on feedback (with no penalty) or, if you just did an excellent revision on your own, you can now be done. That seems fairest, since I wasn't able to get them back yet. (I'm going to post my reason for that in just a bit, after I work up to looking at the pictures.)
-T. F.
posted by T. F. at 6/09/2007 03:23:00 PM
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Response to Collaborative Projects
The organizations that everyone seems to be working with all seem to be very interesting and very worthwhile. It is also interesting to see that there is a broad range of organizations that work with all types of individuals who are in need. The biggest thing to remember when working with non-profit organizations is that the work that is done by the students will probably be used by the organizations and needs to be professional quality. I have worked with the Make-A-Wish foundation before and they look to a lot of businesses for donations that make their work possible. It is important that any material used by the organizations look professional because these materials are going to be viewed by professionals. If material is not professional looking these people may not take the organization seriously.
posted by Nikki at 6/09/2007 03:15:00 PM
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Response to Not For Profit post
I find it great that you ladies want to help out an organization that is for the awareness of AIDs among college students. I actually never heard of them either being from Atlanta myself. Hopefully they were easy to get in touch with and you were able to find a lot of useful information about them. What exactly will you ladies be doing with them?
posted by Emmanuel at 6/09/2007 02:32:00 PM
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Response To Emanuel and Matt
I think that Our House sounds like a wonderful organization, but a potential problem that occurred to me is that since their services are directed towards homeless individuals, they will be harder to reach. They most likely do not have daily access to the internet, TV, or something like that that advertising counts on. Unless your challenge is to get donations, volunteers, or something in that realm I could see this being very challenging. The only way to solve this would be to create a poster or billboard.
posted by kimrhoads at 6/09/2007 09:10:00 AM
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Thursday, June 07, 2007
Green light on proposals
Greetings,
I just wanted to post a quick note to let you know that all the proposals I've seen on the weblog and gotten via email seem viable, with the modifications that I've posted/sent. Remember that if you have questions, post them here so I can answer here and everyone can benefit from the information. Thank you.
T. F.
I just wanted to post a quick note to let you know that all the proposals I've seen on the weblog and gotten via email seem viable, with the modifications that I've posted/sent. Remember that if you have questions, post them here so I can answer here and everyone can benefit from the information. Thank you.
T. F.
posted by T. F. at 6/07/2007 12:41:00 PM
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Wednesday, June 06, 2007
History of Our House by Emmanuel and Matt
Our House was founded in 1988 by local citizens of Decatur, Georgia who recognized that there was a lack of affordable childcare that kept many families from overcoming homelessness.
The founders of Our House wanted to make it a place where parents could leave their children for free while they go seek employment or permanent housing knowing that their children would be in a safe and loving place. Over the years though Our House has evolved into a place that give valuable supportive services for entire families.
Our House was the first homeless-specific childcare center to receive accreditation from the National Association for the Education of Young Children.
The founders of Our House wanted to make it a place where parents could leave their children for free while they go seek employment or permanent housing knowing that their children would be in a safe and loving place. Over the years though Our House has evolved into a place that give valuable supportive services for entire families.
Our House was the first homeless-specific childcare center to receive accreditation from the National Association for the Education of Young Children.
posted by Emmanuel at 6/06/2007 01:04:00 PM
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Not for profit Organization summary
Kristin and Kim
The not for profit organization that Kim and I are doing is AIDS-next. AIDS next is an organization created by four Emory University students along with the support of the Emory student government and three Emory professors. The organization was created initially with the purpose to host an event taking place at the HiFi Buys Amphitheater in Atlanta, GA. This event called "classroom on the quad" is something that the Emory student government puts on every year. The event hoped to enhance college students awareness of aids by bring speaker such as Magic Johnson and John Mayer. Emory university has a history of aids research so this organization was just another step in their continued fight against aids. Today the organization is focusing on planning an event that can reah a broad range of college students.
The not for profit organization that Kim and I are doing is AIDS-next. AIDS next is an organization created by four Emory University students along with the support of the Emory student government and three Emory professors. The organization was created initially with the purpose to host an event taking place at the HiFi Buys Amphitheater in Atlanta, GA. This event called "classroom on the quad" is something that the Emory student government puts on every year. The event hoped to enhance college students awareness of aids by bring speaker such as Magic Johnson and John Mayer. Emory university has a history of aids research so this organization was just another step in their continued fight against aids. Today the organization is focusing on planning an event that can reah a broad range of college students.
posted by KRISTINSUTTER at 6/06/2007 02:43:00 AM
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Monday, June 04, 2007
Response to Technical Writing Posts
Everyone seems to agree, good technical writing skills are important to almost every profession, but the application is significantly different for each and every situation. The differences in the definitions of technical writing reflect the vast area covered by this field. Technical writing is involved in almost every imaginable field, because clear communication is essential to success all facets of the professional world.
posted by bgrace at 6/04/2007 04:13:00 PM
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4 Articles
These four articles defined technical writing a little more clearly by talking about specific applications. The first three dealt specifically with the types of activities in which technical writers are involved in typical work settings. It is clear that there are many places for the skills of technical writers and there will be even more as communication and technology continue to develop.
It made me realize how many ways I already apply technical writing in my job. It also made me hope I can continue to develop my skills to communicate even more efficiently. The last article gave a few pointers towards improvement. I hope I will surprise my co-workers with some new tricks by the end of this course.
It made me realize how many ways I already apply technical writing in my job. It also made me hope I can continue to develop my skills to communicate even more efficiently. The last article gave a few pointers towards improvement. I hope I will surprise my co-workers with some new tricks by the end of this course.
posted by bgrace at 6/04/2007 03:49:00 PM
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Org. History: Hilary & Lindsay
Habitat for Humanity International is a non-profit service organization that focuses on building and rebuilding homes for the underprivileged that otherwise may not have a place to live. Since it was founded in 1976, Habitat for Humanity has built and rebuilt over 200,000 houses.
The idea for Habitat for Humanity was born in a small Christian farming town in Georgia. Two people, Clarence Jordan and Linda Fuller, worked together with families to build homes from the ground up. In order to fund these projects, the families that inhabited the houses were put on payment plans to cover only the expense incurred during the building process (no labor charges). Families are also offered no interest loans and donations of supporters.
The idea for Habitat for Humanity was born in a small Christian farming town in Georgia. Two people, Clarence Jordan and Linda Fuller, worked together with families to build homes from the ground up. In order to fund these projects, the families that inhabited the houses were put on payment plans to cover only the expense incurred during the building process (no labor charges). Families are also offered no interest loans and donations of supporters.
posted by hilarylane at 6/04/2007 03:27:00 PM
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Saturday, June 02, 2007
Question about Project 1
For the references used in my paper, should I just make a list of the references I used on a page or do I have to directly cite where I used a source in my paper?
posted by Emmanuel at 6/02/2007 01:54:00 PM
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Response to Hilary/Lindsay, Emmanuel/Matt, Brandon/Amanda...posts on Technical Writing
After I read the responses about technical writing that three pairs of my classmates wrote I noticed several similarities between their responses. First off everyone said something about technical writing and communication which I think was a very important point to mention. Technical writing helps people to communicate with their audience, whoever their audience may be. The importance of clear communication in technical writing is something that me and my partner found as well when we were defining technical writing together.
Another similarity that I found between my classmates postings was notion that technical writing is job specific. This means that the technical writing you do will depend on the job that you have. This does not mean however that some of the techniques will not be the same from job to job because they will be.I think it was Amanda/Brandon who mentioned this point which is very important.
Another similarity that I found between my classmates postings was notion that technical writing is job specific. This means that the technical writing you do will depend on the job that you have. This does not mean however that some of the techniques will not be the same from job to job because they will be.I think it was Amanda/Brandon who mentioned this point which is very important.
posted by KRISTINSUTTER at 6/02/2007 01:44:00 PM
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Response to collaborative posts: Everyone
It was very interesting to read everyone's collaborative posts and to see the different things that they included in their definition. I found it very interesting that some of the posts involved things that were useful to the authors as far as their career paths were concerned. I know that in Brandon and my post social work was mentioned which is the career path that I have chosen and in a few other posts I noticed other careers mentioned that I had heard mentioned before. Everyone seems to acknowledge that technical writing is different for different careers but that many things may be important to all fields.
posted by Nikki at 6/02/2007 12:47:00 PM
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Response to Articles
The first article was mainly about technical writing in the field of technology. It discussed the many different needs of the field for certain types of writing. I am not entering a field that deals with technology so this article really did not apply to me even though it was interesting to see that there is a need for these things in the field. When I consider careers that are heavily based in technology I usually assume that there is no need for technical writing, but apparently there is.
The second article was about many different types of writers that are present in the professional world. This article discussed the many different types and pointed out what qualifications were needed and what the job actually dealt with. I was very surprised to find out that there is actually a profession know as "technical writer"! Most of these careers were communications oriented although there was a segment that discussed writing in the medical field. Since I am going to be working either as a counselor of as some sort of case worker many of the things that I may have to deal with could be the types of research writing that were discussed in this article.
The third article had to do with technical communications and exactly what that means on a professional level. The part of this article that was the most relevant to my field is conducting internal training for an organization. There will probably come a time in my career when I will be responsible for the training of another person and the use of written guides will probably be employed.
The fourth article dealt with technical writing and how to improve your individual technical writing for the field you anticipate entering. One thing that I found useful was the section on jargon and how it should be used for different audiences. When I am writing for my career it is important that I use terms that will be understood by the different audiences. When I am writing for colleagues it would be appropriate to use psychological or even psychiatric terms whereas if I was writing for a patient or someone outside of the profession it might be helpful to explain certain terms or to use a description that would be easily understood.
The second article was about many different types of writers that are present in the professional world. This article discussed the many different types and pointed out what qualifications were needed and what the job actually dealt with. I was very surprised to find out that there is actually a profession know as "technical writer"! Most of these careers were communications oriented although there was a segment that discussed writing in the medical field. Since I am going to be working either as a counselor of as some sort of case worker many of the things that I may have to deal with could be the types of research writing that were discussed in this article.
The third article had to do with technical communications and exactly what that means on a professional level. The part of this article that was the most relevant to my field is conducting internal training for an organization. There will probably come a time in my career when I will be responsible for the training of another person and the use of written guides will probably be employed.
The fourth article dealt with technical writing and how to improve your individual technical writing for the field you anticipate entering. One thing that I found useful was the section on jargon and how it should be used for different audiences. When I am writing for my career it is important that I use terms that will be understood by the different audiences. When I am writing for colleagues it would be appropriate to use psychological or even psychiatric terms whereas if I was writing for a patient or someone outside of the profession it might be helpful to explain certain terms or to use a description that would be easily understood.
posted by Nikki at 6/02/2007 12:29:00 PM
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Friday, June 01, 2007
Queston???
Dr. F,
i was wondering if it is okay with you to push the post time from 7:00 back to around 10:00 for the entire class.
Thank you
i was wondering if it is okay with you to push the post time from 7:00 back to around 10:00 for the entire class.
Thank you
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/01/2007 04:53:00 PM
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Response to Classmates' posts
I read all of the definitions for technical writing that everyone has posted. I found it interesting that they all agree that technical writing is different for everyone depending on their profession. I feel that everyone did a good job of encompassing the broad spectrum considering that pretty much everyone in this class is from a different major. I also feel that even though we are all from different majors and do all kinds of technical writing we also share a lot of very common technical writing skills.
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/01/2007 04:50:00 PM
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Response to Classmates' posts
I read all of the definitions for technical writing that everyone has posted. I found it interesting that they all agree that technical writing is different for everyone depending on their profession. I feel that everyone did a good job of encompassing the broad spectrum considering that pretty much everyone in this class is from a different major. I also feel that even though we are all from different majors and do all kinds of technical writing we also share a lot of very common technical writing skills.
posted by Matt Wilson at 6/01/2007 04:50:00 PM
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Response to Emmanuel & Matt; Brandon & Amanda:
What I liked most about their definition of technical writing was that they defined it as writing that exists in a different language according to the job. It is most definitely true & it’s something you don’t think about when you first think of technical writing.
I like that Brandon & Amanda pointed out that technical writing involves learning to adapt to a certain type of writing style, defined by each job.
I like that Brandon & Amanda pointed out that technical writing involves learning to adapt to a certain type of writing style, defined by each job.
posted by hilarylane at 6/01/2007 02:54:00 PM
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Responding to Technical writing by Emmanuel & Matt, Brandon & Amanda, and Hilary & Lindsay
It seems to be a common thread that technical writing is a form of communication in a particular format designed for a specific audience. I think that all three of these pairs had very similar definitions of technical writing that I cannot really disagree with, except I do not think that technical writing is very different in every field. I think that based on the posts that I have read that all the fields have more in common with communication concerns than they do differences. All of these fields involve directions, memos, letters, and emails among many other components.
posted by kimrhoads at 6/01/2007 10:08:00 AM
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