RESPONSE TO KIM'S RESUMES AND LETTERS

I think that you did a very good job with your request and thank you letters. It was good that you specified that you were not trying to get a job but that you just wanted information on a job in the field. I think that your resumes were good too but you might want to put the headings of the categories in bold or capital letters to make them stand out more. Also I was a little confused on the two different addresses on the different resumes. The home one was put on one and it said school in parenthesis but, there was no school address listed. I especially liked how you kept the resumes short and to the point and did not put a lot of “fluff” in them.