Response to Bobby Cole’s Individual Project

It looks like you’re off to a good start on your project. It was a very good idea for you to conduct another interview when you found it necessary to add more information and details to your project. I liked the structure of your paper. I think it is a very effective way to relay the message of your paper. Maybe you should try to add some personal experience to your paper. This would help add to the length and make it more personal. Good luck with the rest of your project.