Post #2- Comments on Davids Letters and Resumes

Resumes

In resume 1, your first object you might was to keep it short and simple talking about the job you wanted to get. This sounds very general. This might be a resume to for something like Grad School or something school related. Just seemed like the objective was aimed at a specific job  like the second resumes objective.

In resume 2, I guess you were trying to make it different than the first one, but im sure the plant would probably appreciate your GPA info and if you have a minor i would include that too.

Letters

Interview Request

This is very good. Straight to the point. Made it clear that you were not asking for a job. Maybe add in something that will make the more likely to meet with you. Say they are an expert or that you enjoy the field they work in, instead of just simply saying you are in the same field. Just adds more appeal.

Thank you letter

Good Letter. I'm guessing this is before the actual interview. Add in actual changes or revisions that he suggested when you said "on part of my resume that needed improvement"

All the four things were really good. Just tried to give as much advice as possible.