Post- Resumes, Interview, Letters
Jenna Moskow
June 10, 2008
Rhonda P. Richardson
Assistant Director of Employment Services
Dear Ms. Richardson,
My name is Jenna Moskow. I am a Junior at
I would like to set up a time where we can discuss the guidelines you look for in deciding who to hire for your Hospital’s employees, and show you my resume so I can get ideas for improvement. I will be contacting your offices soon to try to set up a time. Thank you so much for taking for taking me into consideration, and I look forward to meeting you soon.
Sincerely,
Jenna D. Moskow
JOB RESUMES:
Resume 1
JENNA DANEAN MOSKOW
(864) 784 0264
EMPLOYMENT OBJECTIVE
Server, Host, and/or Bartender in a restaurant or bar.
EDUCATION
Major: Biological Sciences Minor: Spanish
Dean’s List – 3.75 GPA out of a possible 4.0 in the Spring Semester of 2007
Maintaining LIFE Scholarship with a required minimum GPA of 3.0 and 30 hours a year and Dorothy Friend Scholarship with a required minimum GPA of a 2.5
Secretary of
EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE
ATHENS RESTAURANT (
Host, May 2004 until May 2006
Answered the phone, sat new customers, designed the Special announcements, to-go orders, cashier, and occasional paperwork. Developed familiarity with the restaurant business, learned how to work with many different types of people, developed better ability to work with money and complicated transactions.
HIGH FALLS RESTAURANT (
Host and Expo, October 2003 until December 2003
Answered the phone, sat customers, and took drink orders as a host. Promoted to expo, acquired skills in assembling plates, learning how to read tickets with shorthand, and delivering customers food in the correct order. Developed desire to work in a job that always requires work to be done, and requires the ability to work quickly and efficiently. Developed my first skills similar to those required by a server.
FATS CAFÉ (
Host and To-Go, January 2004 until August 2005
Answered phone and sat people as a Host. After transferring to To-Gos, took and put together all to-go orders, worked as a cashier for the customers and the employees. Improved my ability to work efficiently and quickly, and improved my ability to work with money. Balanced the cash register every night.
MUTTS BBQ (
Cashier, Cook, Dish washer, and Server, August 2004 until February 2006
Acquired skills in every area required in a restaurant. Improved skills with money and making transactions, learned new skills of cooking a variety of foods, and by working in several different areas of a restaurant, learned the difficulty and respect needed in every area. Given the first job title as a server and learned several skills in communicating with the customers.
COPPER RIVER GRILL (
Host and Server, May 2006 until April 2008
Answered the phone, made floor-plans, assigned side-work, and took to-go orders. Promoted to server and developed the ability to work efficiently as a server. Learned how to manage my time and responsibilities efficiently, developed the ability to communicate effectively with the cooks on the line, the managers, the other workers, and the customers. Gained skills in customer sales, and developed skills in working with money. Promoted to Floor Captain of most shifts worked and developed the ability to monitor other servers work and keep everyone working together positively and responsibly. Acquired skills in communicating with other workers effectively.
THE BODY SHOP (
Secretary, May 2007 until August 2007
Answered the phone, open and closed down the store, made appointments, washed sheets, washed dishes, cleaned the store. Learned how to work with managing people’s schedules and make appointments. Improved certain skills such as working with people, money, and managing time.
SPECIAL SKILLS AND ACTIVITIES
Ability to communicate effectively and positively with co-workers and customers. Several acquired tasks over working in all the different areas involved in restaurants. Ability to work well with money and make calculations quickly and correctly. Acquired preference to remain busy and productive throughout shift, and work up to higher positions.
REFERENCES
References will be available upon request.
Resume 2:
JENNA DANEAN MOSKOW
(864) 784 0264
EMPLOYMENT OBJECTIVE
An assistant to a neurologists in the Clemson-Seneca area.
EDUCATION
Major: Biological Sciences
Minor: Spanish
Dean’s List – 3.75 out of a possible 4.0 (Spring ’07)
LIFE and Dorothy Friend Scholarships maintained
Secretary of
EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE
ATHENS RESTAURANT (
Host, May 2004 until May 2006
Answered the phone, and occasional paperwork. Learned how to work with many different types of people, developed better communication abilities.
HIGH FALLS RESTAURANT (
Host and Expo, October 2003 until December 2003
Answered phones. Quick promotion to expo. Learned how to read shorthand quickly. Developed desire to work in a job that always requires work to be done, and requires the ability to work quickly and efficiently.
FATS CAFÉ (
Host and To-Go, January 2004 until August 2005
Answered phone and sat people as a Host. After transferring to To-Gos, took and put together all to-go orders, worked as a cashier for the customers and the employees. Improved my ability to work efficiently and quickly, and improved my ability to work with money. Balanced the cash register every night.
MUTTS BBQ (
Cashier, Cook, Dish washer, and Server, August 2004 until February 2006
Gained knowledge in many different areas, and improved my ability to communicate efficiently.
COPPER RIVER GRILL (
Host and Server, May 2006 until April 2008
Promoted within first three months to server, and then server captain. Learned how to manage my time and responsibilities efficiently, developed the ability to communicate effectively with coworkers and customers.
THE BODY SHOP (
Secretary, May 2007 until August 2007
Answered the phone, open and closed down the store, made appointments, maintained the cleanliness of store. Learned how to work with managing people’s schedules and make appointments. .
SPECIAL SKILLS AND ACTIVITIES
Ability to communicate effectively and positively with co-workers and customers/patients. Three years of experience working in labs through Clemson Science courses. Ability to manage time efficiently, work accurately within a short amount of time, and always working towards the higher level.
REFERENCES
References will be available upon request.
THANK YOU LETTER:
Jenna Moskow
June 10, 2008
Rhonda P. Richardson
Assistant Director of Employment Services
Dear Ms. Richardson,
I would like to take this time to thank you for allowing me to meet with you. I now feel as though I am more prepared on how to one day apply to a job in a Hospital such as MUSC. I will definitely take your advice and work on broadening my work experience. I thank you for all of your advice, and I will definitely take it into consideration in the very near future. Thank you again.
Sincerely,
Jenna D. Moskow
2 Comments:
Jenna, most of this looks quite good, but in the letter where you ask for the interview, it sounds like you've given up hope. Rather than writing "I had hoped" I would suggest something like "I hope" or "I plan" or something that indicates that you still intend to go. :-)
Oh! I must have passed over that part when I was writing it! I'll be sure to change it, thanks.
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