Advice to Cathie's Posts

Request letter:

Very precise, with minimal wording. That plays a big part in how the reader takes your attitude (nobody likes to read a paragraph that could be a sentence). I think you have contacted the perfect person for what you are looking to go into

Resumes:

Your resume shows a lot of experience in your field, which is a huge advantage. It was very to the point, with only the facts. I would maybe add more bulletins so it makes the resumes easier to read (with all that experience/education it gets confusing!).

Thank you letter:

Brief and grateful (as it should be), and good format.

(I tried to criticize as much as I can, but honestly I couldn't find much to criticize. Looks good!)