Response to Ashley Mauldin's Project

I am glad that Ashley feels her paper has come together well. Before I started writing my paper I felt the same way that she did- I did not think I was going to have enough information to be able to meet the length requirement. I think Ashley was smart in her choice to follow the model in the book because it is a solid reference that she can always refer back to. Ashley decided to divide her paper into 3 sections, which seems to be working for her. I divided my paper into 5 sections- the only difference between the information that Ashley and I included is that I broke my information down into more specific categories. I feel that the way in which she divided her paper works very well, too. Ashley says she anticipates making some changes in her paper, which I am sure that all of us plan on making changes as well. I think Ashley has a great start on her project.