Post #2
For Post #2 I will be commenting on Jenna's Request/Thank You Letters and as well as 1st and 2nd Resumes:
Request/Thank You Letters:
Jenna did a good job in each of the letters of portraying gratitude. So it seemed very personable. However, neither the request nor the thank you letter indicated a handwritten signature. Addresses/headers were not present. In the thank you letter, what exactly/more specifically did you get advice with? Overall good job!
1st and 2nd Resumes:
I like the clean formatting. Bullets are very effective in adding ease and readability. The experience in each seemed very specific (and is a great thing when employers are comparing resumes!!) Not sure there is a lot I would change here. Again great job!
Request/Thank You Letters:
Jenna did a good job in each of the letters of portraying gratitude. So it seemed very personable. However, neither the request nor the thank you letter indicated a handwritten signature. Addresses/headers were not present. In the thank you letter, what exactly/more specifically did you get advice with? Overall good job!
1st and 2nd Resumes:
I like the clean formatting. Bullets are very effective in adding ease and readability. The experience in each seemed very specific (and is a great thing when employers are comparing resumes!!) Not sure there is a lot I would change here. Again great job!
posted by *Amy J.* at 6/13/2008 08:01:00 PM
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