Response to Joe, Tammy, and Casey

Joe-Your resume looks good. Watch your spelling. You might also want to rephrase some of the job descriptions to sound more concise and professional. Instead of "I helped my niehgbor" or "I delivered pizza," maybe you could say Helped ederly nieghbor with various chores or Delivered pizza to 30-40 customers a night. Hope this helps!

Tammy-Your resume is very impressive. Any employeer could tell you know what you are doing. The only suggestion I could come up with to vary your resume is to shorten the job descritions-but that is what I think is so impressive! Good job.

Casey-Again, I think you should explain about your course work-maybe give specific examples of projects. Leave the information about cheap pizzas out :) I think you did an excellent job describing your internships and work expereince. You made them sound very important and interesting, which should give you a lot to talk about in an interview.