Update on Individual Project (I posted this yesterday....but I guess I messed up!)

I can honestly say that I really didn't know where I was heading with this project, until I actually began putting the words down onto paper. The funny thing is, the more I wrote, the more I convinced myself that this really is a class that the engineering department needs! So, I guess I must be sort of on the right path, since my goal is to convince people within the department!

I am a little unsure of my format though. I am hoping that I can get some feedback about how to perhaps change the structure a bit. Also, I found myself out of things to say, and I think I really need to figure out a way to lengthen the paper a bit more. I would love any insight into which areas I should discuss in more detail, or perhaps topics I didn't even bring up that should be addressed as well.