Update on project 1

Well, looking over my first post of project one I realiazed two misakes. First, I han't even copied the memo onto blogger! Instead I had copied a file with all the information I wanted to use to create my memo. To fix this I copied the correct draft of my memo on blogger -so make sure you check my first draft out. I believe you'll find it more understandable. Secondly, I looked over some of my peers' rough drafts and realized they used the section titles from the book. I did not do this; however, I do not know if my way is incorrect. If this is a problem I will have to go back and edit. In addition, I would like to go into more depth about BIOSC 222/223. I was assuming the audience would know about the course description, but some of the students might not have taken or heard about these classes since they are not required by the microbiology department.