Response to Kinsey's Individual Project

It sounds like you're paper is really coming together well. I really like how you're structuring the paper by dividing it up into different sections. I think that by doing that it will make the paper very clear to the reader and will make it well organized. It sounds like you're going to have a lot of good detail as well. Also, I like how you noted that your writing style has improved; it was interesting to know how this project has influenced you outside the class. Everything seems to sound really great and I know you will have a good paper! Good luck with everything!