General Response to Resumes
I looked over 3 different resumes to gain a general concensus on the quality of each resume. Stephen Dubose had a very effective resume. While his resume was not too long, it contained the neccessary information which was pivotal to his objective, that of gaining a co op position in real estate. The three job experiences that Stephen mentions all stress interaction with other people, a very neccessary tool when entering any field, especially the real estate business. It would be to Stephens benefit to mention what exactly Iptay is to help the employer understand. This was mentioned earlier about my resume by Pam. The computer skills are great and overall, the resume is good because it is both short and to the point, what most employers look for.
Ashley Mauldin's resume was impressive because of all her work experience. Her objective is clear and with the good grades and excellent experience, she makes a good candidate for any job position. Because she is specifically trying to get a job with chilren it would be of her most benefit to expand upon her volunteering service and try to further convince the employer that she can be trusted with children. Overall, it was a very good resume.
The next resume I looked over was Haydens. Again, Hayden has great experience, but not specifically in the field of engineering. Clemson has a great engineering program, and if he goes into more detail about the program here at Clemson, it would be of great benefit to him. It would make more sense to go into detail about a couple of the awards he recieved, especially the Engineering one, which seems like a great honor. Don't be afraid to show who off your talent in the subject; that is more important than mentioning minor details about the job experience that is not relavent to the field. Overall, another good resume.
After glancing over almost all the resume, I noticed a couple of common traits. For one, everyone mentions their computer experience, which is good, but I wonder how true it is. Microsoft Project is a complex program, along with many of the others. Anyway, this is a good thing because employers want people that have the capability to use a computer to its fullest potential.
Ashley Mauldin's resume was impressive because of all her work experience. Her objective is clear and with the good grades and excellent experience, she makes a good candidate for any job position. Because she is specifically trying to get a job with chilren it would be of her most benefit to expand upon her volunteering service and try to further convince the employer that she can be trusted with children. Overall, it was a very good resume.
The next resume I looked over was Haydens. Again, Hayden has great experience, but not specifically in the field of engineering. Clemson has a great engineering program, and if he goes into more detail about the program here at Clemson, it would be of great benefit to him. It would make more sense to go into detail about a couple of the awards he recieved, especially the Engineering one, which seems like a great honor. Don't be afraid to show who off your talent in the subject; that is more important than mentioning minor details about the job experience that is not relavent to the field. Overall, another good resume.
After glancing over almost all the resume, I noticed a couple of common traits. For one, everyone mentions their computer experience, which is good, but I wonder how true it is. Microsoft Project is a complex program, along with many of the others. Anyway, this is a good thing because employers want people that have the capability to use a computer to its fullest potential.
posted by Anonymous at 6/23/2005 07:29:00 PM
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