General Response to Resume: Kinsey Knight

Your objective was straight to the point and memorable. Good. You know what you want and are going for it. Maybe open up with a general statement and then lead to your specific: ‘To use my knowledge and experience with health science to obtain a position about health education with the intent of educating children living in Africa...’ Remember to tell me what you have to offer even when you are defining what you wish to obtain. The rest of the resume was detailed and well organized. When you refer to your positions when working with younger children, harp upon your interaction with them. Let me know you have qualities that I am looking for, such as teaching young children new ideas. Highlight that you were “responsible for educating a group of people the rules of polo for the first time” or “responsible for working with the children while teaching the new concepts of water polo.” Let your possible employers known that you have experience in communicating with children. Good job and yes I will hire you!