General Response to Resume: Shayaa Smiley

I was impressed with your direct and very appropriate objective. Tells me exactly what you want. Under your education, would you be comfortable putting you overall GPA as well as a GPA in your major classes? I would be interested in seeing that. Your emphasis on your leadership skills was impressive, as well as you expansive volunteer experience. I know you are involved and can handle to juggle several tasks at once. My only suggestion is to beef up your work experience if possible. Do you have people skills or can you act on the spot? For example, under Red Lobster, do not mention you simply greeted guests, but were ‘responsible for welcoming and interacting with a variety of people and keeping a cool head when situation become crowded and uncomfortable.’ Or as a Desk Assistant, you could list that you ‘employed my problem solving skills on the spot for students with various requests and problems.’ Looks good overall and I would love to have an eager student like as an intern for my company.