Response to Jason Patterson's Resume

Jason’s resume is good. Because he doesn’t have much job experience, I think he should go into more detail about the two jobs that he did have. In addition, because there is a lack of employment experience, he could combine his volunteer and employment history and make just one heading. The heading could just read “experience” instead of breaking it down into two different categories. If he is applying to an engineering position, he might want to exemplify on the engineering background he received at Clemson. Any projects he completed could maybe be noted. Engineering should be the focal point of the resume. Clemson has a very good engineering program and there is probably something worth noting that Clemson added to his education that other people applying, from other schools, do not have. Again, this lack of employment can be overrun by the great education he received here and the great volunteer record he possesses.